Friday, August 20, 2010

What's a cliche?

A flame of desire burns within me,


to touch your delicate skin.


To feel your warm breath.


You drive me insane,


with all your love talks


But are you real? Or is it just in my mind?


My phone rings again,


shivers run down my spine. (cliche, change it)


My heart starts to beat fast,


sour sweat runs down my neck.


It’s your voice, I hear it once more,


making me dream, making me scream


Could you be telling me lies? Could you be a fake?


But my mind has stopped working,


now that my heart is beating too fast.


I want to run my fingers through your hair. (cliche)


Let you know how much I love you too.


But why can’t I touch you? Why can’t I see you?


But I have waited too long,


you have made my life hell.


Every night I sleep alone,


dreaming of what you look like.


My phone is ringing once more today,


I know its you calling me.


I don’t want to hear your voice again,


but a force is pulling me.


Just free me and let me live (cliche)


But I can’t, you’ve trapped me,


I live with this bitter happiness…

What's a cliche?
A cliche' is an over-used word or group of words. They show a lack of originality and creativity. They are commonplace and show a lack of substance.
Reply:Cliche is something like "Love conquers all"





It's an oft-mentioned phrase or statement.
Reply:Just about every line of that. Wow - terrible!


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