I'm Brandt White and my rhymes is tight!...?

Here is a rap I wrote. Is it good? Would you buy it? Will it blow me up? On a scale of 1-10 what is it?


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Brandt's My Name


I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)


I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)


Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O


Thats my home phone number


When you call I'll be stackin' my doe [Disk mix]





I'd like to say it but I can't


"I'm your ordinary, unchanged Brandt."


Brandt's the name, it's still the same"


Who's to blame? Could be the fame


Could be the cash. Could be your dame


I'll blow up quick and run the game


I got new moves. I'm payin' my dues


Don't try to compete cause your destined to loose


Slim Thug, Mike Jones, Bun B. and Paul Wall


I'll come up behind them when they start to fall


When I see the chicks, I'm actin' mellow


They're all on me before I say "Hello"


I got a crew on the East Coast and on the West


You better sit back down and make way, I'm the best


I got some dime, I'm in my prime


Don't waste my time while you fall behind





I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)


I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)


Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O


Thats my home phone number


When you call I'll be stackin' my doe





When they say I can't rap, screw them


My rhymes are phat, I'm the next Eminem


I might not be black with a dark skin tone,


But I can spit a verse on a microphone


These liberals don't understand me


Cause I keep my 12 gauge handy


I'm Brandt White from the Dirty South


I don't have to swear and use a dirty mouth


I'm gonna stay fly. Won't drink or get high


Don't need it to get by. Thats not how I'm gonna die


I'm a full time pimp, but sometimes I rhyme


I'm up in the game and now I'm feelin' fine


So quit actin’ so dang silly


You can’t screw with this milli


And when you see me on MTV


You'll know I'm as good as Pimp C


You do not want to fight me


I'll beat you in my white tee


You can come to a show to see me


It will only cost a small fee





I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (What?)


I’m Brandt White! (Who?)


Brandt White!


And you know you can’t touch this ‘cause my rhymes is tight! (Ohh)


Sev Sev Five Double Three Five O


Thats my home phone number


When you call I'll be stackin' my doe

I'm Brandt White and my rhymes is tight!...?
im sorry dude but i would give u a 3 at the most.nobody wants 2 hear bout yaself so much step ya game up n write some new rhymes n then post em back on tha net.tha only thing u got goin is ya hooks











madame st.queenie(tha bronx is back n full effect)
Reply:'Cause your rhymes are tight.


Plural noun plural verb.
Reply:its a big 10
Reply:Gawd!... yeah , we need more of this! (sarcasm)
Reply:yo u aint mike jones and mike jones is gay u say ya name 2 much but besides dat its aiyte
Reply:blown up! is a very good expression, Yes this song will most likely get you blown up lol